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新的申请季即将开始，对于申请美本的同学来说，最棘手的任务莫过于是写文书了 。美国三大系统文书 学校文书数量多，任务繁重，想要写好，不仅需要有足够的素材积累，也需要了解如何写、怎么选适合自己的题目 。有了充足的准备后，才能更好地把自己的特点用最恰当的方式表达出来 。
近日，The Crimson公布了2023年度被哈佛大学录取的7篇优秀文书，并且每篇都附有哈佛的官方点评 。正在准备申请的同学们可以好好阅读一下，对于之后的文书写作将有极大的参考价值！
今年这些公布的哈佛优秀文书题材多样，写作方式各有千秋：

描写自家后院的平凡经历如何影响自己的人生以及对STEM的热爱；
通过光的颜色在不同的人眼里有细微差别，来表达我们的个人教育和经历可以改变我们所看到的东西以及如何改变；
创业收入从10美元到900美元再到0美元，一杯柠檬水如何让作者的行动和理念逐步提升？
接下来，让我们一起来好好看看：
Amy's Essay：“The Color of Everything”
There’s a theory that even though each color has a specific wavelength that never changes, how people perceive a specific color may have subtle differences based on small differences in photoreceptors, and the color that one person might consider red might still be red in another’s mind but could look different— a little duller, softer, cooler. Furthermore, how a person’s brain processes the color may also be linked to that person’s environment. Some studies have suggested that color sensitivity could be linked to one’s native languages: for example, people who speak languages that have specific names for eleven colors are able to easily distinguish those eleven colors, but people who speak languages with fewer color specific words may have a harder time distinguishing them.
So it appears that even at the most elementary level of sight, the world is not an objective thing. Instead, what we know and what we remember can influence what and how we see. The color blue may just be the color blue to a three year old, perhaps her favorite color even, but an adult might connect it to so much more—the lake by his childhood home or the eye color of a loved one.
I first consciously became aware of the power that our experiences have to change perception when I went to turn on a light in my house after learning about photons in class. What had previously been a mundane light suddenly became a fascinating application of atomic structure, and I thought that I could almost perceive the electrons jumping up and down from energy level to energy level to produce the photons that I saw. I then realized that my world had steadily been changing throughout my years in school as I learned more and more. I now see oligopolies in the soda aisles of the supermarkets. I see the charges warring with each other in every strike of lightning, and the patterns of old American politics still swaying things today. Knowledge and making connections with that knowledge is the difference between seeing the seven oceans glittering in the sun and merely seeing the color blue. It’s the difference between just seeing red and seeing the scarlet of roses blooming, the burgundy of blood pumping through veins, and crimson of anger so fierce that you could burst. Knowledge is color; it is depth, and it is seeing a whole new world without having to move an inch.
It is knowledge, too, that can bring people together. I love listening to people’s stories and hearing about what they know and love, because if I learn about what they know, I can learn how they see the world; consequently, since behavior is often based upon perception, I can understand why a person behaves the way they do. On a road trip during the summer, my mom kept looking up at the streetlights lining the highways. When I asked why, she told me that whenever she saw lights by a highway she would wonder if her company had made them. She would guess how tall they were, how wide, and what style they were. She told me that ever since she started working for her company, lights no longer were just lights to her. They were a story of people who first had to measure the wind speed to figure out what dimension the lights had to be, and then of engineers, of money passing hands—possibly even under her own supervision as an accountant—and then of transportation, and of the people who had to install them. I might never perceive lights the exact way my mother does or see her “red” but by hearing her describe what she knows, I can understand her world and realize her role in ours.


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